A few of my poems over the last couple years. Never thought of looking for a community till now. Hope you enjoy.

Poem

[Twilight]

Exploding waves escape the dying light,

A beautiful kamikaze attack on the impending night.

A war, a dance, and a fleeting sight,

Peace of darkness has ended the fight.

~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~

The shattered remnants of the conflict contain

Honey-touched sparkles, like the shine of the rain.

Magnificent canvas, no detail in vain,

The chain to the pain may no longer remain.

~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~

What obelisk dared to be so bold?

In our sight a warmth that leaves it cold.

Such round pale reminder of what we have sold:

Silver just does not compare to the gold.

~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~

From the darkest of ashes, a phoenix does rise

Ruing the day that it had lost its eyes.

With benevolent vengeance the bright light buys,

The object that it knew was always the prize

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[Daydreaming]

My mind fell through the floor,

Sunken castle of the Queen,

And my heart shivered at the fingertips

Of its caretaker.

~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~

Life continues

But I remain here,

Watching as reality shifts

Into utopia.

~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~

To daydream, to feel

The buoyancy of the background noises,

Is a lonely sunset in June, but daydreams of you

Are the summer dawns waking by your side.

~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~

If I lay so still, so incredibly motionless,

That time moves on and light forgets,

Your image in my mind will still make my heartbeat

Shake the foundation of the Earth.

~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~

Does art thank the artist?

Does the brush stroke the painter with affection?

The love you made within me is a masterpiece

And thanks you with every smile.

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[Fledgling]

My grandfather rescued a fallen fledgling

When I was six.

To be handed life itself, teeming with potential,

An unfurled rose barely containing the floodwaters

To his temporary splendor.

~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~

He was no more than 2 ounces

And about as tall as my shoe.

Green and black streaks

Covered his gray wings.

~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~

The fledgling jumped on the couch, on my chest,

Bouncing and tilting its head as he stared at me.

He had become the child of a child.

Had clairvoyance possessed him with revelations Of a loving future?

~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~

Two warm hands wrapped around him,

An embrace so strong,

It was only challenged by the bond

Created as my reflection stared back

From strangely bulging eyes, dull and empty.

~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~

An impromptu ceremony was held

Next to the dumpster

Outside by the road,

His limp body held by the rock on which he lay

Defenseless.

My uncle said his heart had stopped.

~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~

I dreamed that night of the fledgling

Standing tall upon the rock,

Wings spread, tilted head as always,

Finally ready for flight.

~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~

The next morning, I ran outside

To see a bare rock and a bare street.

My grandfather hugged me as we walked back inside,

And smiled back when I told him how my fledgling

Was forever free

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Edit: Sorry for the funky formatting, I wanted to make sure everything was properly organized to ease the reading experience. Let me know if you have any constructive criticism of any kind :)

Posted Jun 3, 2022, 9:59 AM UTC · edited

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