Ohhhhh, okkkkk! Now, this is good f\*cking poetry right here! Made me shiver n´ quiver inna heartbeat! Wow! Hope you expand upon this style, very unique (I think at least :P) and super effective when done right! And you, dear poet, hit. the. spot! Cheers, Lucca

Hey there I quite liked this short poem!  I loved the last two lines and how they really encapsulated that feeling of touch, however idk how to really feel abt that first line. You talk about getting goosebumps from touch while being in some sort of haze but don't really say what kind of haze it is. It could be a bad sort of haze where the touch is interpreted negatively or it could be a romantic sort of haze where you feel goosebumps because this is sort of like a crush. If you want it to be ambiguous like that then great, it's working perfectly, but if not, maybe drop another hint somewhere in the first line or the title to help the reader come to a conclusion? That's really about it though, other than that I don't really have much. Either way great write, keep at it bro! : D

I really like the phrase "prickly gooseflesh", interesting texture and imagery!
One thing I wish is you could somehow expand upon summer (mentioned in the title), and haze. And perhaps who is it that is touching your skin, and their relationship to you?
Despite the short length , I really enjoyed the feeling and potential meanings it could have, it leaves much to the imagination and it is very interesting.


Hello readers, welcome to OCpoetry. This subreddit is a writing workshop community -- a place where poets of all skill levels can share, enjoy, and talk about each other's poetry. Every person who's shared, including the OP above, has given some feedback (those are the links in the post) and hopes to receive some in return (from you, the readers).

If you really enjoyed this poem and just want to drop a quick comment, to show some appreciation or give kudos, things like "great job!" or "made me cry", or "loved it" or "so relateable", please do. Everyone loves a compliment. Thanks for taking the time to read and enjoy.

If you want to share your own poem, you'll need to give this writer some detailed feedback. Good feedback explains from your point of view what it was like to read the poem, and then tries to explain how the poem made you feel like that. If you're not sure what that means, check out our [feedback guide](https://new.reddit.com/r/ocpoetry/wiki/feedbackcritiques), or look 

Deep in a haze

Fingertips brush against mine 

Prickly gooseflesh 

&amp;#x200B;

[1](https://www.reddit.com/r/OCPoetry/comments/v3xhuw/comment/ib6dbm1/?utm_source=share&amp;utm_medium=web2x&amp;context=3)

[2](https://www.reddit.com/r/OCPoetry/comments/v446ry/comment/ib6d3cn/?utm_source=share&amp;utm_medium=web2x&amp;context=3)

Summer Haze