Your Head/My Head

In your head
You're a rogue
A renegade
A tortured artist
A melancholy genius
A poet

But really

You're just a man
With a job
Someone's husband

In my head
You're my rogue
My renegade
My tortured artist
My melacholy genius
My poet

But really

You're just a man
With a job
Someone else's husband

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