To Remind me of You
All I ask for is one pixel,
To code in java
To hang from my flahs veins;
A homebrew script of you
Nen@
Just give it away, one pixel
One I can hammer down into my skull
And turn into a forever HTTP
The blackest of them all, dire dark
One I can keep hidden in my frontier pocket
And chek out in two thousand years
To see it age in 4K
Just like this high-fidelity
We call sadness.
Posted Jun 20, 2022, 10:52 PM UTC
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