The dance around the sun

Why?
You drag me nigh, you made me try
as the sky is vast, you made me say goodbye
to the person I hold tight, just for our love to untie.

If only, we met at the right time
there will be less soul to put into flame
what did I do? To fall for someone like you
Making me feel blue without a clue
making me flew without virtue
but you, are something I can't undo
so I want to know, if this feelings is true

Feeling blue in June
feeling new in view
keeping you in too
the only thing I pursue

If only, we met at the right time
we'd be enjoying every summertime
our love will be in frame
there will be no need to be like this
and we'll fly to a place we will rejoice

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This is my first attempt at poetry. Any feedback is really appreciated!

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