[1841] Road to Nowhere - Chapter 1

Road to Nowhere - Chapter 1

Mini Book Blurb: >!Two siblings embark on a cross-country roadtrip in search of the mom who abandoned them to run off with a cult. !<

Primary Concerns:

1. Do you want to keep reading? Why or why not?
2. A lot is kept hidden from the reader in this chapter. Is too much hidden? Are you annoyed and/or confused about what's going on?
3. First impressions of Luella & Alas?
4. Any particularly awkward exposition?

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