[1268] Wood Road Ch 6 Part 2

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Story - Wood Road Ch 6 Part 2

Hello there!

Here is part 2 out of 3 of the 6th chapter of my novel. You can find part 1 here.

The book is about how a host of characters in a small, religious town deal with the disappearance of three kids and how it strains the relations between them.

Sorry for the weird breaking up of this chapter, I might post the other chapters in a more organized manner after I have gotten all three parts of this up (if you guys aren't already annoyed with me for posting so much /j). It is a little hard as most of my chapters are 4-5K words long, so I need to break them up. I will burn that bridge when I get to it.

Coming back to this, this part mainly consists of some dialogue. While it isn't the best dialogue in the story, I still tried to build a bit of tension and make the characters feel as authentic as possible. Do tell what y'all think.

Thank you!