[1840] Temple of Redemption - Ch.2 Part 1

Hi guys!

This is part one of chapter two in my fantasy novel, Temple of Redemption. I'm focusing on world-building, backstory, and characterization. My goal was to sprinkle in enough backstory while hinting at how the MC and her family are in a dangerous situation.

The first chapter ends on a bit of a cliffhanger, so that's why this one starts so abruptly. I'm looking forward to your crits!

ToR Chapter Two - Part One

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Posted Jun 27, 2022, 5:52 PM UTC · edited

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