what Haiku's can you come up with?
Posted Jun 28, 2022, 7:53 AM UTC
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I wrote this Haiku
Just because you asked me to
Are you happy now?
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You bring so much joy
With all the small things you do
You are wonderful.
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Green leaf in the spring, caged bird with newly clipped wing, torture felt within.
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Another kiwi
It is still winter down here
the cold is torture.
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These are the real
Haikus in this thread I think
People do better
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Life
Born learn ascend
Existence
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I appreciate the effort but it's 5/7/5
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Three five three
A variation
Accepted.
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“Mack”
Let the people know
That I’m back to run the show
Return Of The Mack
“Gone”
Fight the break of dawn
Girl you know I’ve got to go
Tomorrow I’ll be
“Lollipop”
Like a lollipop
Lick me like a lollipop
Like a lollipop
“Beyond The Stars”
Beyond Antares
The skies are green and glowing
My heart is waiting
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While these are all great
I doubt they're original
Rather they're copied.
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I reworked some songs
That I like because it’s fun
So I’m cool with it
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Well given your plea
I recuse my early take
You're a true poet!
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squishy soft dumplings,
one with spinach one with meat,
dinner is ready.
(just ate dumplings for dinner, yes)
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That sounds delicious
makes my thoughts warm and fuzzy
Very good imagery.
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If you reply with a limmerick instead
I'd think so good of you in my head
I would sing your praise
Till the end of my day's
And cease only once I am dead.
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Mine is:
my back is so sore
I never wanted to come
Cant we just go home
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Tomorrow, always
Possibility, and hope
Pastrami; I will
Poetry and ham
What a beautiful combo
Very well done sir.