[1534] Blood Summer, MM Vampire, Chapter One

So I got tired of YA and decided to do something a little different as a break project, and my brain came up with MM vampire erotica, because why not. It's so much fun.

Blood Summer - Intro

This is the only part I'm going to post here - just to see if the setup works. It's half the first chapter; the rest is a pov switch to the other main character - Luca's childhood sweetheart who is now a vampire hunter, who participated in that hunt. The clothes come off by Chapter Three and it gets very explicit so I don't think any more after this is appropriate for the sub.

I'm marking it NSFW because there's adult themes, but that's just me being cautious, there's nothing here to concern really.

I'm aware there's a slab of exposition, and the logistics in the positioning of everyone in the last section might need work. I'm open to all ideas. I didn't want to fuss too much rewriting before I posted though, as I'm on a roll.

Questions - does it hold interest? Do you start to skip the exposition; if so, at what point?

Usual general thoughts on word choice, description, pacing etc, cutting, expanding. If the setting is clear, if I need more scene setting or character sketches etc.

Note: I am using British English for spelling.

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