Seasons Of The Soul

This is the first haiku I’ve ever written and the first time I’ve posted on this sub, so be nice y’all 😂.

Earlier today I was reading a Wikipedia article about the proposed future timeline of Earth, our solar system, the Milky Way, and the Universe, and this breviloquent poem seems to nicely sum up the entire timeline.

One thing, though; if it is a haiku, you've got one too many syllables in the first line.

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Not much for me to say except that I enjoyed how you started with darkness and ended with darkness and didn't go the easy route of starting with either light and then ending with darkness and vice versa. This makes the phrase "cycle is anew" work perfectly. Thanks for sharing.