it's a long one, hold on please
Songbirds
There was a small cage inside my heart
Made out of twigs and twine
And grey leaves and green moss and flowers color of wine
The bars so thin it couldn’t hold anything captive
And with a swing, so lovely, it had everything you shall need to live
There was a songbird inside the cage
And it was blue and yellow and red
Didn’t matter the hue if you heard how it sang
And there were fireflies floating above its head
Lighting up the place, the little songbird’s shed
And there the bird would sing, inside the cage, inside my heart
Its melodies of joy and hope and memories from the past
I would listen and laugh and cheer and dance
We lived together, the bird and I, as friends
Then the double man came
With his fat callous hands
His duplicitous smile and his well-hidden lies
Said he wanted a peak at my little songbird
Maybe hear just a song and that’d be over
But he reached out his paws as he knew he shouldn’t
The songbird stopped singing and frightened, took its flight
So the man went away, said it’d been just a game
But the bird was now gone and without its musings
The lightbugs flickered and the flowers withered
There was a sad cage inside my heart
And I lived alone, waiting for a friend to come back
Luckily there was you, there had always been you
You had seen the whole thing but you couldn’t believe
You were quite positive that the bird would come back
No need to lay a trap, just follow the right track
You helped me in my quest to get the songbird home
In its cage, in my heart, to resume singing songs
The both of us we worked getting the cage back in shape
You were good with the knots, had the twine firmly laced
We picked up new flowers and new leaves and fresh moss
Made the cage so pretty we had fireflies a lot
Just missed my colorful songbird to give life to these parts
There was a hopeful cage in my heart
And I lived with you as I lived with my bird, friends forever endeavour
There was a small cage inside your heart
In all shapes and manners identical to mine
There was a songbird inside you cage too
And it had the most beautiful hymns to sing for you
The bird followed your lead, if you are sad, be sad, if you are mad, be mad
And il you are happy, let everybody see
You lived in harmony, your little bird and you
Getting to know the bumps and puddles that might lay on your path
But there is this one thing that neither you or I nor any bird did know
That fate in its blind rage has the tricks most cruel
And in just one second, your bird, your cage, your heart were crushed
Nothing to do, nothing to say, it just had all been lost
As I witnessed all this my heart shook and my little cage crumbled
And I sat there speechless wondering what you would do
There is a giant hole inside my heart
And I live without you, without my bird and without friends
And only you could’ve made this story end well
Posted Jul 19, 2022, 3:39 PM UTC
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