Gifted

You’ve made it easier to stay alive

As I’m gasping and pulling away from demise

You are an angel who’s pulled me home

Not crying, just silent, just blotting my nose

Up until three a.m. making my giggle

When I’m with you I’m feeling not little

You’re a beacon of whom I wish to be now

Please let me learn from you and pass this gift around

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