Oh my goodness, thank you so much. Your review means the world to me!

The rhyming sequence in this is absolutely brilliant.  
The is a definitive beat to this, like I cant' help but read it in my head one specific way. It helps with the feeling of "ebb and flow", as well as producing a sort of longing for the next verse. A poem that physically pulls you into it is rare; kudos on some masterful work.


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Across time Spirit whispered


Souls turned, drawn to the sigh. 


Lives woven, forever bound. 


Ebb and flow, where are you now?



I know your heart,


Your song is mine.  


A thousand times we’ve found each other,


A thousand times torn apart. 




And now, so near.


But time will not bend.


Just this gentle touch brushing by. 


How long must I wait until





Spirit whispers


Again?






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Across Time