r/CritiqueMyWriting•14 yr. agotilerugcarpetI had some very helpful critiques to my first submission...anyone care to tackle #2? (semi) short storyhttp://theroosterwrites.blogspot.com/2012/07/rain-pounded-theroof-as-he-lay-wide.htmlPosted Jul 10, 2012, 5:28 AM UTC30Share