[1256] Lydia at night, part 2

Here is the second part of the story. In this segment Lydia has a close encounter with the angel Mallory.

Any and all thoughts/criticism welcome. Let 'er rip!

Story segment: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1opXf0gSZfD8EBcNyngQvbaYQYC7u7G-50SabTDFt4IU/edit?usp=sharing

Crit: https://www.reddit.com/r/DestructiveReaders/comments/wbc84e/1594_pandemic/ii77lsv/