Yuanfen (Original poetry, looking for some criticism/feedback)

Are you a ghost or have you never been A cosmic draw that pulls me down within You're always there, though doubtful you exist A near-forgotten dream, a lost lover's final kiss Buried by reality, stained by moonlight's glow A white flag, I surrender, but it will never show You forever mark these words, I lie and prophecize One day we'll meet again, a stranger in my eyes