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I really love the question you end this on. Reminds me of that famous piece of poetry ‘and you may contribute a verse’. I’m not sure if it was asking the breeze the question but I intepreted it as asking me personally where the breeze might carry me, where will my voice, even my poetry, end up? I like the metaphor of the breeze as an agent of travel, change, movement. I really loved some of your imagery too, flexing trees and the empty conch in particular! Lovely fresh poem. Well done!

You have a unique writing style that I actually really enjoy. The imagery is whimsical and fun to read. I only wish there was more to read!

The breeze wraps around me,
Passes me 

Plays my ear like a instrument.
A empty conch, 

not brittle or fragile 

Like glass howling and bouncing off the planes in my ear 

White noise,

Moving across the country.

Making the stubble ochre grass rustle,
leaves 

Trees flexing 

Where will you end up 
Who’s ear will you play in?


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Breeze