"I Am That I Am"
Who creates the darkness and the light?
Who divides the daytime from night?
Who draws the line between wrong and right?
You do,
You do.
Who knows your every thought and deed?
Who spoils your soul with hate and greed?
Who has exactly what you need?
You do,
You do.
Who puts the meaning behind your voice?
Who fills your heart when you rejoice?
Who enslaves your mind, but leaves you a choice?
You do,
You do.
Who gives you pleasures to tempt your taste?
Who gives you time with which to waste?
Who redeems you once you are disgraced?
You do,
You do.
Who's responsible for all your pain?
Who separates sacred from profane?
Who's name do you cry out in vain?
Your own,
Your own.
Posted Jul 19, 2012, 10:40 PM UTC
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This just sounds like a song- in that it's got that repetitiveness that is fine if backed with music but really falls apart on it's own.
Needs some more meat, it's all fluff