and gone it will stay

i honestly love the use of the word home, its scattered in and really emphasises your tone. the length of lines is choosen i assume to represent the panic and questions and it really illustrates that well.
i like it a lot

Home has never really been a positive place for me, if it's even a place at all. I really enjoyed reading this It's beautiful.

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I love this. Especially the use of the first line in a different tone and structure, later. But It's sad that you ended it this quickly. I hope you'll extend it a bit more, someday. Maybe somewhere in the middle. Keep writing. :)