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My first thought reading this was: This is so cute!
Something about the combination of nursery rhyme style of imagery and the really fun rhymes (“You dont look back…..man, you’re just the snack” is my favourite) makes me actually smile and laugh to myself. Of course the familiarity of this situation is also relatable - feeling cheated and disappointed by somebody, or maybe by everyone in your life - but its something that is usually explored with a more pessimistic and emotional attitude, so the style here gives a familiar topic a very fresh look.
I really enjoyed it

Lol… I only threw that in there because they were so closely related I thought it would be something that would give you a good laugh. You’re a good writer keep up the good work !

Thank you for showing me your poem. I’m glad you liked my piece.

I love this piece. Well conceived with a very valid point. Although with respect I would like to point out one small thing..




“Big bad sheep

Sent out a mid the wolves sheep we may be, 



yet only those born black as night are like unto me, 



and let it be known to one and two all;



 that this black sheep has both fangs and claws. 😈”

Thank you. I read your poem and it’s lovely. It’s not just about saying your a Christian but by acting it out and being a light.

Very nicely done. 
I wrote a poem a while back called "a wolf dressed in wool". It's in my profile if you are interested in having a read.

I think that the rhyming really brings this piece together at the end and ends this perfectly as we all may be in the pasture of wolves we can only be lambs to the slaughter.

Beware of wolves in sheep’s clothing

They be roaming, and composing

Searching for a prey

Showing you “the way”

Telling you it’s okay

You may think you’re in a pasture of sheep,

But really in a pasture of wolves

Clueless, you don’t look back

They’ve been following your tracks

Man, your just the snack

Secluded, it was all colluded

Intruded, now you dead

You may think you’re in a pasture of sheep

But really in a pasture of wolves






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Wolves in sheep’s clothing