[1808] Checkpoint version 2

Hi,

I posted a previous draft of this a few days ago, and made revisions based on lots of great feedback. Now I'm afraid I might have over-compensated... Any feedback is much appreciated, hopefully I've addressed all the inconsistencies and other issues from before without going too far in the other direction.

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1nuJt9FInICs1F9g3ML-aGmoKU-OcyozF/edit?usp=sharing&ouid=108272648249610433566&rtpof=true&sd=true

Crits:

https://www.reddit.com/r/DestructiveReaders/comments/x1ttpv/comment/imgkdky/?utm_source=share&utm_medium=web2x&context=3

https://www.reddit.com/r/DestructiveReaders/comments/wc0qfu/comment/iig7u7k/?utm_source=share&utm_medium=web2x&context=3