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I used subtly because the feeling of everything physically seeming the same externally but the energy around shifting. This is second revision plan to keep on it until it feels perfectly write. Thank you for reading and I do agree as a whole it was not subtle

Very true for what the experience of love is except I don't think the universe just changes 'subtly'. Keep writing.

The emotion in this poem is so real. There are a few typos and I think the first letter of many stanzas should be lower case, but you’ve captured a very honest and authentic feeling of a first (or strongest) love.

Soulmate (Revised)