Got a little depressed
English version:
The wound is fresh, but...
The wound is fresh, but the horizon that takes shape is flamboyant. There is no need to look back to the past, because the call of fate is much more pleasing.
May this umpteenth lesson be of good advice to us, may it enrich us even more. isn't that what life is? The gentle storm preceding the furious beginning, until the next...
the next injury
French version:
La blessure est fraîche, mais...
La blessure est fraîche, mais l'horizon qui se dessine est flamboyant. Nul besoin de se retourner vers le passé, car l'appel du destin est bien plus réjouissant.
Que cette énième leçon nous soit de bon conseil, qu'elle nous enrichisse davantage. n'est-ce pas là ce qu'est la vie? Le doux orage précédent le furieux commencement, jusqu'à la prochaine...
la prochaine blessure
Posted Sep 11, 2022, 6:30 PM UTC
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