[1313] Janie dreams of magic

Hi all. This is a flash fiction/very short story for you to digest and regurgitate. No specific requests, just tear it apart as you please.

Story here: [Janie dreams of magic] (https://docs.google.com/document/d/1LkyP8P1Ez3CxSVu8vpzDIC7c5tiFQP2fPsrn7tzK-DA/edit?usp=sharing)

Critique her: Critique