This is really good and to the point. I can feel a sense of vulnerability in it.

yeah, i love writing from different perspectives. it’s a way of empathizing and understanding different experiences—even if i don’t think it’s personally realistic/a bit overly optimistic.

Sounds ideal. To be seen and to be known and handled correctly without prompt.

I really like this. There’s a clear introduction of thought (beginning). You explain the feeling and service the other party provides the speaker (middle) and a lovely resolve the speaker ends at (end).

I really, really like this. Honestly my ideals for a relationship of any kind, however unprobable it may be. Having someone know all your flaws and vulnerabilities accept and love you despite it all, even going so far as to inspire you to improve sounds really nice. Really beautiful in its simplicity.


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you unravel me at both ends.

you see past my lies — my disguise.

you see past the mask.

you see the glass,

you handle with care.


you light a fire

in every. part.

you inspire me.




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unraveling