Collide
Monument of calamity,
hanging,
while falling,
pulling,
and pushing.
Pockmarked face,
sometimes smiling,
Always reflecting,
Or hiding.
Lunatics be star crossed,
Often romanticized,
is a rock responsible,
for the personification,
it endures.
There’s not much to say,
but so much to take in.
When the nights are dark,
cry a new and look,
for the empty sky.
Where stars will shine,
did shine, and still shine unseen.
Where Gaia’s shadow falls.
Think of all the eyes,
empty of gleaming.
Posted Sep 27, 2022, 11:19 PM UTC
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