Which CommonApp Essay topic would be better?

Personal Essay

Hi

For my CommonApp Essay, I will be choosing this prompt: the lessons we take from obstacles we encounter can be fundamental to later success. Recount a time when you faced a challenge, setback, or failure. How did it affect you, and what did you learn from the experience?

However, I'm split on which topic I should use:

  1. Moving to another school for high school from a k-12 school I was in my whole life, how difficult it was to settle in and make friends, how I eventually joined clubs and participated in activities that helped me make friends and settle in, and how confident I am now due to that experience.

  2. Growing up with a stutter and talking about how difficult it's been to communicate and speak to people, but trying to cure it through public speaking opportunities, speeches, and putting myself out there, and how I'm more confident and easily able to speak publicly now as a result.

What do you think?

Thanks

Posted Oct 4, 2022, 4:15 AM UTC

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McNeilAdmissionsMod | Private Admissions Consultant (Verified)•

Pick the topic you want to write about — the one that's really personal and meaningful. THEN retrofit the prompt to the topic. Don't worry about the prompt at all until you've landed on the right essay topic.

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Mundungus727HS Senior | International•

talking about a school transfer is super clichéd I'll be honest with you. Im an international student and i myself (along with a lot of people ive known) have transferred more than 5-6 times across their schooling career. I actually moved in the middle of IB so yeah it was not fun. But apparently its milked a lot during the process - plus AOs can already see that you moved schools from your transcript and they can see ur ECs and stuff on your app from your new school. Your counselor LoR should also include the fact that you moved schools anyway.

The stutter is a much better improvement to focus on IMO because its not something that a lot of people go through and it isnt really shown anywhere else on your application.

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Nervous-Bath1375HS Senior•

Definitely the second, the first is definitely something AO's have seen before. Try and put your own twist on it though!

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Bin0401•

2

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CommunistTomato•

stutter

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2

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guesswholoveswoolfHS Senior•

Second one for sure. First one is a little over done

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AsmaNK-•

2

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Ok_Hunt6025•

Second one definitely

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