[1272] Jasmine

Thanks in advance for anyone taking the time to read and/or critique this! It's a full piece, nothing else.

Story here:

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1IhBoIueouPNNJJY7AWteYTctlxs1hRLOgcdt2HdCSd8/edit

And...

[1484] Critique here