Optimism

Far from the best poem I've read but it gets the sentiment across in a simple way. I've felt as you have, unsure about myself and looking for an end. Glad you are still with us and happy, it's ok to be happy something I have remind myself of from time to time, reading this also reminds me to feel proud of my own accomplishments. Thank you for sharing.

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This is so deep and I really resonated with it. Please keep writing and sharing this with people. Lots of love A.M.

this portrays a struggle so well even within a happy moment👍

I really like the quick resolve of all your questions at the end. It gives itself to the sort of self-assured tone of your poem! Nice

This was sweet. I like how hopeful it got at the end, and not being a perfectionist is honestly good advice for everyone.