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Thank you! Yes, unfortunately, I fucked up. Poetry is my way of self reflection and expressing my emotions in a constructive way to -hopefully- implement real change within. Those two lines are my favorite too. I'm glad you appreciate and enjoyed my work, friend!

Very good poem. I love "heart in the hole... Heart is on hold" it sounds great out loud.
If this is you - it sounds like you f**k'd up. We all do. Just try to translate it into real change, rather than just to poetry. Things will improve my friend.

To my core