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Thank you so much for your kind words! I really appreciate it 😊 this is highly unlike the vast majority of my work but I thought I'd still give it a try! Thanks again!

It must be cold where you are lol. Its a cute and small poem. I love short poetry, because you need to get the message across in a smaller framework. Overall I like your poem but I urge you to reconsider how you get the message across. Some words get lost in the middle. Keep writing!!!

Frosted panes of brilliance


The separation of hearth and tundra


Hearts stay burning, evermore

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Solitude