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Hello! Beautiful poem.
What is the significance of the blue sky? I think you should add a little bit of an allusion as to what it means or why it is relevant to the poem. 
Also, are you talking about two people or one? Because first you address the (I’m assuming) beloved as “he”. And then that changes into “you”. A good tip is to be consistent with the pronouns if you’re speaking about one person. 
I think this poem suffers from being a little too vague!
:( What is this man’s vision and why does no one understand it? What are the person’s true colors?
Thank you for posting. <3

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