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I really enjoy the ambiguity—is the scent one of orange blossoms raining down, or of blossoms and the recent rain together? If read aloud, you wonder whether the scent is peaking, at a new high, or peeking, just a faint wisp of an odor. And of course the beauty-after-a-storm theme never gets old. So much packed into 14 syllables!

I really like this - I think the simplicity really works, especially in the Haiku style (I'm assuming!). I really also like the sense of peace the poem brings. Thank you for sharing!

Orange blossoms rain-

a broken scent peeks

after the storm.

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