Well, I like that you are expanding my mind in what can be labeled poetry. I appreciate the creativity. 

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I'd be interested in where this sub-genre of poetry can go. Perhaps there's something to this style!

Thanks for your feedback! I know so many people can relate to the negative effects of antidepressants.

This hit a little close to home for me. My love is on antidepressants and it does not do good things for our sex life.

No problem. Though I only just realised Zoloft wasn't some made up name but antidepressants like your said. So my feedback isn't perfectly geared though I'm happy if it's of some use

Thanks for your feedback! I will definitely consider expanding on the idea because the title definitely was inspired by what I feel is an issue when it comes to prescribing antidepressants. Specifically, towards the psychiatrists who only prescribe for money. Thanks again for your recommendation!

This rings a lot like a commercial over poetry, based on conventional poetry most visualise when the word poetry is brought up. I would recommend reworking this to have some semblance of a rhyme scheme, or alternatively you can keep it in prose but expand on that title. "Commercial Castration" has so much dystopian potential, from serious implications such as those in Aldous Huxley's Brave New World where procreation is regulated by high officials; to more goofy prospects such as the capitalistic (but crazy as hell) potential expressed by the last lines or two of this [copypasta (NSFW warning](https://www.reddit.com/r/copypasta/comments/mqyq1i/dolphin_pussy_jelly/?utm_source=share&utm_medium=mweb3x) (though yours would be to stop libido, not catalyse it of course)

Thank you for reading and for your support!

No offense but maybe very much offensive to the people in this comment section: fuck anyone who thinks to dictate a format, define poetry as X or Y. This is poetry and this is great. Keep going.


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“Hey you out there! 

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mind,

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If you try to fuck, you won’t get it up!

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