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bungeemanPandemonium Institute•

Hey, this is a great start to a script, but if you'll permit a bit of feedback, I have a few suggestions to make it even better.

  • Consider putting it in standard order, it'll be much easier to read that way.
  • You only have 12 Townsfolk which can be a problem with larger player counts. This can be easily resolved though, because...
  • You don't have a Choirboy. If the King is on a script, the Choirboy must also be on the script. They come as a pair.
  • The town is extremely powerful. Between a Professor who can prove themselves, a Lycanthrope and an Exorcist who can block evil from killing, and an Acrobat who is just a Demon detector, I'd be very surprised if evil could win on this script. Consider subbing some of them out for more passive roles.
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VideoheadsystemOP•

I'm all about the feedback! Is the acrobat that much of an issue? What should I sub it for?

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bungeemanPandemonium Institute•

Top be fair, you do actually have Cannibal and Sailor on the script, so I was a bit too hasty on that one. But the rest of the suggestions I'd heartily recommend looking at.

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Ser_Capelli•

Acrobat and assassin are the only way to get multiple night kills. That can confirm a drunk/poisoning which is almost always going to be pretty good for the good team. If you put another means for multiple night kills then I think it all synergizes much better.

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SPDallday•

King will just get killed whenever with no choirboy

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VideoheadsystemOP•

Made this script to run for this Saturday in Boston. Any tips or obvious red flags I've missed? The aim was to make something "monster mash" like.

Was mulling swapping Cannibal for gravedigger. Any cannibal thoughts specifically?

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Jamile94•

With Leech and Lycanthrope on the same script you run the risk of a very short game if the Lycanthrope chooses the Leech host.

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VideoheadsystemOP•

Okay, changes being made:

Swapping King for Mayor

Assassin For Psychopath

Tinkerer for Acrobat

Fortune Teller for Exorcist

Removed Zombul, doesn't gel with so many roles, put in Shabuoth, but I'll gladly take suggestions for something thematic or interesting instead.

I've kept the number of players the same, I don't think I'm getting more than 13 people for this game on Saturday. It's in person if thats a factor to be considered.

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mark_radical8games•

Golem is super powerful in an evil twin game, not even an outsider.
Acrobat in a lleech game could be extremely short. Doubly so if the golem or lycanthrope are in play.

And, as said, you need a choirboy.

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Ser_Capelli•

Other than acrobat I'm worried about professor confirming two players. There two confirmed living that evil looks like they will struggle to deal with.

Witch + zombuul is also some rough counter play with each other.

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