Im embarrased by what I posted here. Feedbacks please.

Let it remain,

the dagger of love,

that you stabbed in my heart.

Don’t retract it please,

I won’t be able to bear it’s separation.

So let me die in peace,

knowing I bled in your arm,

breathed my last

under your alluring charm.

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