Immortal Normals

I've thought of perhaps making a collection of poems I write during my time at college, mostly focusing on heavier topics and questions entitled things i scream into the void.

Whether or not this becomes part 2 behind my first post here is to be decided. I suppose it depends on if I ever feel motivated enough to edit and revise. These poems might not take me long to write, but they sure as hell are taxing, mentally and emotionally.

On the bright side, I have access to a wonderful organization known as Tiger Bark Press (check it out they publish cool things COUGH shameless promotion COUGH) that helps writers in my home area get their stuff published.

this is a wonderful poem! thanks for sharing. you are immortal, that is normal... it is just abnormal or uncommon to see that, which I guess makes it seem less common from the observers viewpoint.

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I don’t know how to feel about it, I can feel one line but I can’t feel the other, I like how it made me understand it but also feel confused! I really liked this line (but can you live with your morality, when you can’t escape your reality?)

Of course I want to be immortal! (Imagine all the shiny Pokémon I could catch!)

I like this because it's something that I don't think that much about. When I was younger, I thought the lifespan of a human was too long, but the older i get, the more I hope to live to see a ripe old age! Good post!