[1472] A Bird in the Hand

Hey, so I wrote this for the 2020 Halloween contest, but I never put it up for feedback, so I figured now was a good time to do it. Especially since I failed to come up with something for the contest this year lol. Obviously it's been a while since I wrote it, so don't be afraid to rip it apart.

My original description: A murder of crows arrive in town for their annual trick-or-treating. What could go wrong when a boy refuses to give them treats?

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