[992] Opening Scene of Chapter 2 -- The Chaiwala in the Iron District

Hello alll! Back to working on my YA Fantasy right now! This is the first scene of chapter 2, also serving as a character introduction to Avani (2nd MC).

I've realized that I somewhat struggle with writing fantasy because I'm shit at balancing story/character with worldbuilding/setting so any of your thoughts would be greatly appreciated!

Looking forward to hearing your colorfully destructive crits!

Doc: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1zxLXNbBu-FvNGNlDGPlJrSw9sNHptIjeuKbRZNxv5pk/edit?usp=sharing

Crit: https://www.reddit.com/r/DestructiveReaders/comments/yzdnm0/1033_the_vanguard/ix5qogf/?context=3