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I like imagery. It was very calming reading this. Good job

Love this! The poem just seemed to flow easily, nothing felt rushed or too dramatic, and honestly the imagery was amazing!

Brilliant work! I like how you used different settings in expressing the subject. To me, the -in(g) rhymes made the poem flow smoothly. The last stanza provided for a very good ending as it felt like the culmination for the appreciation of "the whisper". Well done :)

I really appreciate the vivid imagery, this felt like a lullaby to read. Thanks for sharing!

Like everyone one else, the vivid imagery you were able to bring to life was the first thing I experienced. The second was the accuracy of the words that brought those images to life. This is exactly how I feel, as a life long, reluctant morning person who recently adopted a lively morning pup. Every time we go on our, way too early, early morning walks, our post breakfast/pre lunch walks, our post-lunch pre dinner walks and our evening walks.

Wow the imagery is very amazing. Could definitely picture myself in your poem. That’s the most important part of poetry in my opinion. Having the readers go in your head. Awesome job

The early morning   
before the world is awake   
The calm outside   
The soft whisper across the grass

A frozen day   
Of fresh fallen snow   
The ice is blinding   
The whisper of a blowing drift

The soft crunch of sand   
The palms in the breeze   
Warm day on your skin   
The whisper of the tide coming in

The bright moon over head   
Backlighting the sleeping world   
Still stars starring back   
The whisper of animals all around

The morning light streaming in   
Cascades across your skin   
Not yet awake, but not asleep   
The whisper of warm breath on your neck

\-B

Link1 [https://www.reddit.com/r/OCPoetry/comments/z03smi/anger/?utm\_source=share&amp;utm\_medium=ios\_app&amp;utm\_name=iossmf](https://www.reddit.com/r/OCPoetry/comments/z03smi/anger/?utm_source=share&amp;utm_medium=ios_app&amp;utm_name=iossmf)

Link2

[https://www.reddit.com/r/OCPoetry/comments/yzn18h/dear\_alcohol/?utm\_source=share&amp;utm\_medium=ios\_app&amp;utm\_name=iossmf](https://www.reddit.com/r/OCPoetry/comments/yzn18h/dear_alcohol/?utm_source=share&amp;utm_medium=ios_app&amp;utm_name=iossmf)

Whisper