the black sheep

I've been writing for a while but till now I only wrote in my native language (which isn't English) please point out things I could improve.. thank you

"Faulty girl, faulty girl don't worry at all Your value stands firm no matter how hard you fall. They want you to fit in, to be their little doll. Their main goal is to make you weak and small.

Faulty girl, faulty girl, it's okay, it's okay So what if you haven't done anything today. You're swimming upstream with sad eyes. A winter-girl between the summer allies.

Faulty girl, they're killing you, putting you in a prison But please my faulty girl, don't you dare to listen. This crowd is hungry, this crowd is cruel. Those simple metals are so afraid of a jewel.

Faulty girl, faulty girl They drown you with big words, like potential. Life or death? Which one is worse? It's up to you, a blessing or a curse.

Faulty girl, faulty girl, Why are you so quiet? Don't let them enjoy your tortured silence I know it burns, you know they don't care I know I'ts hard, I was there

Faulty girl, you'll grow, you'll grow big and strong And then you'll realize Broken kids are the ones Who change the world." https://www.reddit.com/r/OCPoetry/comments/z3n7vv/feast_of_innocence_beginner/ixppafe?utm_medium=android_app&utm_source=share&context=3

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