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Overthinking past romances is a pain, wondering what you could've done differently or if you still have a chance. Then wondering if they still think of you, truly a battle for the brain to handle

I feel physically sick

More with each tick

The world tangled up in my chaotic brain

Thoughts clashing like the silver edges of two swords

My feet unable to stay steady 

Continuously skidding against each other

Without the will of my mind

Expressing the ache of my heart

Oh my heart!

It grimaces

The silent ache

Its missing your presence 

This slight chest pain

Says it all

The love resides here

Like it was its home all along

Like a permanent tenant to my heart

I feel it throbbing 

Feels like a sharp pinch

At repeated intervals 

This desperation it has for you

Just unbelievably tragic

Who are you?







Feedback

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HEART