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isiyaram

Cracked Open

Workshop

Spiky scarlet

egg shell armour

waiting to be cracked

open.

Savour my sweet

scented centre:

jelly filled

candy cloud.

For I’m no

bloody stone,

I’m a lychee.

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Thanks for reading! Currently, I'm not sure about the title, line breaks & punctuation but I’m very keen to know what others think I could change to improve.

The House Always Wins

scarecrow and poppy

Posted Dec 6, 2022, 12:54 PM UTC · edited

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