Worthy of a Comment?

Poem

Does vanity compel me to write?

Am I simply seeking validation?

Do I need an audience to applaud

Like I was a stand-up comedian?

If my poetry remains unread

Was the effort even worth it?

Pathetic as it may seem to be

Am I worthy of a comment?

Yet something inside me growls

It yearns for recognition

Call it arrogance or passion

Or maybe self-delusion

Whatever this thing inside me is -

It beckons me to write

It convinces me that I have talent

That is deserving of your time

As though the things that I can say

Have a chance to truly inspire

And each comment that I receive

Adds more fuel to that consuming fire

But time and time and time again

My poems go unread

And the best that I can hope for

Is the sympathy of a glance

Yet still I write with passion

Believing despite all logic

My lonely poem will disappear

Among the thousands submitted on Reddit

https://www.reddit.com/r/OCPoetry/comments/zebqaq/potato/iz5mhf5/?utm_source=share&utm_medium=ios_app&utm_name=iossmf&context=3

https://www.reddit.com/r/OCPoetry/comments/zebk3z/why_am_i_smiling_less/iz5mr7v/?utm_source=share&utm_medium=ios_app&utm_name=iossmf&context=3

Posted Dec 6, 2022, 6:03 PM UTC · edited

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