An Ode to Valheim
Posted Dec 8, 2022, 2:49 AM UTC
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Written in ABAB rhyme structure with a pattern of 6767 syllable verses, alternating to 6666 syllables on the third and sixth stanzas for weight. I hope you enjoy it.
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I tried to avoid that by leaving gaps between the stanzas. Is it too confusing?
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I read it ok, very nicely done!
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Thank you very much!
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I am not complaining. Just pointing out. I know its harder to write it down right on these signs myself.
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This is actually a cool poem, nicely done!
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I'm glad you liked it!
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Pretty good man, or madam
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Thank you!
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Beautiful. Thank you for sharing.
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Thank you for reading!
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Well done, lovely ode to Valheim!
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I'm glad you liked it!
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What do the signs say?
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Damn man and the rest of us are just putting up shitty basic "Liveheim, Loveheim, Laughheim" signs on our walls ...
Well, if it weren't for those, I wouldn't have been inspired to write my own!
I have "The real Valhalla is the base we built along the way", which I picked up from a comment somewhere on the sub.
Mine says "it's morbin time" and (ง •̀_•́)ง this guy next to it.
If you don't know, looks.wtf work in Valheim.