A Good Son?

Poem

He wore the apron

That his dad baked in

And he threw the bowl

Used for apple pie

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His fury left brown stains

No bonus this time

Now, don't quiet quit

He said, while baking

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And set out to write

About his anger

Cooking in dad's stead

All mean spirited

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Without a ticket

To paradise him

His thoughts wandered here

Take a bullet train?

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He felt everything

Everywhere and now...

All at once it hit

The self hatred rammed

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And the questions start

Was he Pinocchio?

About being good?

A good son for dad?

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He wore the apron

That his dad baked in

And he threw the bowl

Used for apple pie

​

His fury left brown stains

No bonus this time

Now, don't quiet quit

He said, while baking

​

And he wrote anger

And he decided

His actions spoke loud

Louder than his words

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Feedback:

  1. https://www.reddit.com/r/OCPoetry/comments/zhyhmz/may/
  2. https://www.reddit.com/r/OCPoetry/comments/zhx3r7/to_the_lost_ones_in_need_of_healing_from/

Posted Dec 10, 2022, 5:54 PM UTC

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