[1677] How Improv Helped Me Deal with Social Anxiety

Link to my critique: [1864]

Genre: Personal Experience/Blog?

Link: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1UOFkkGEYuMjcd2Jky4vx20C7aYzb6luQaKHdB79qTvM/edit?usp=sharing

This is my first writing in a long time (since high school to be exact, which is nearly 10 years ago now) - any feedback would be appreciated! Especially on how to make it more personal instead of a high school assignment. Thank you for your time!