Hi pals!
I'm so glad I found this sub here. I used to be a part of a critique group in college and definitely miss this sort of atmosphere and community for writers :) Mods, if I'm not doing this right, please let me know! Happy to adjust where needed.
I'm drafting an Urban Fantasy novel at the moment and it's my first in the genre.
I've noticed a lot of people post first chapters of their stories, but I wanted to share an excerpt from what will be [hopefully] the 3rd of 4th chapter. The first few are going to be more slice of life to show that though this is a fantasy world where creatures and humans exist together in a modern setting, things are *fairly* normal (think SJM's Cresc
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