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I need inspiration for a project

Hello all, I’m in a short film screenwriting class at school now and I’ve finished my first short film (14 pages) responding to the prompt “busted” wherein someone had to get caught. I would love any feedback or advice!

https://drive.google.com/file/d/1cIC_n_du4IZZjtJzfJ0DIEBuZwcuJ2K9/view?usp=drivesdk

I’m spending a lot of money to be here, what do I do to make it worth it?